怎样写好英语作文？
年
吴迎建
近几年英语高考作文(由[xszw.org]整理)评分标准
语言：分（无病句，大小写正确，介词正确…等等）内容分（审题正确，内容符合要求,尤其要注意提示）。结构分（句型变化多，层次清楚。用词贴切等等）。
一）最后几天要注意材料的积累，和语言基础方面的训练。
．一般个字的作文被称为三段作文法，“开头、正文（可以量化）和结尾。．句子要有变化，如分词、复合句、强调句、倒装句。 要背一些好的词组、关联词、介词、过渡词。．每一段的第一句被称为topic sentences 要简练、明确。．要学会一个意思多种表达法。例如：I can do the job.I am fit for the job.I am qualified for the job.Challenging this job can give me pleasure.
二）写作方法和技巧
记叙文
记叙文是以记人、叙事、写景等为主的一种文体。记叙文一般有六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果。讲什么，要交待清楚，使文章有头有尾。记叙文叙述方法通常有第一人称和第三人称两种。学生易犯错误，时态不一致，中心、主题不突出。Eg. 记事 A.我最难忘的一件事 B. 为何难忘 C. 感想 I will never forget the day, May , when I became a League member. I had not thought seriously about my joining the League for I thought I was not good enough to join it. At the end of lastterm our League secretary had a long talk with me. It was notuntil then that I decided to make more progress in both mystudies and behaviors. I was invited to take part in the activities held by the League Branch.There I came to know how a League member shouldbehave. I became more and more interested in those activities. Itried my best to overcome my short comings and improve myself. My wish came true on May , the festival for youth. From then on, I fell I have grown up.年秋考 A.我最难忘的一课 B. 为何难忘 C. 感想 记人 我的邻居 Grandpa Zhang is my neighbour. Although he is retired from the factory he is busy at home. In the morning he goes to the food market and then does washing at home. He also takes good care of his grandson whose parents are both working abroad. His wife is in poor health and he has to look after her too. Not only does he care for his family but he cares for the neighbours as well.
Once his next door neighbour was locked outside and turned to him for help. He tried hard to open the door for him. Another time, my mother suddenly fell ill and my father was away on business he helped me to send my mother to hospital in quick time. We all say that grandpa Zhang is the man who never stays idle.
年春考 A.李铭平时很关心他人 B.他买彩票中了奖 C. 他父母打算。。。他打算。。。
应用文
应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的文体。书信、便条、通知。。。等都是一种常见的应用文。学生易犯错误，格式弄错，为何写这信的目的不清楚。Eg. ）申请去美国大学上学。 No. High school Pear Tree Road Shanghai P. R. China
th
Oct., Admission OfficeUniversity of RochesterRochester, NY, USADear Sirs, I wish to apply for a place in the Dept. of Chemistry of your university in the fall of . I’m now a senior in No. High School, Shanghai People’s Republic of China. So far, I’vegot excellent results in my studies and I take special interest in chemistry. I hope to be lucky enough to enter your university right after my graduation. Could you please mail to me your application form and all the related information ? Your timely response is appreciated. Sincerely yours, XX）应聘信P.O. Box ShanghaiMay
th
, P.O.Box BeijingBear Manager,I learned from the China Daily that company is looking for an English secretary. I would like to apply for the post.My name is Fu Tao I am .I’ ve been working as a guide in an international tourist agency since I graduated from the English Department of Zhejiang University four years ago. I am hard-working, and I am seeking a more challenging position with more opportunities than my present job can offer. Thank you for your consideration.Faithfully Yours,Fu Tao 寻物启示I’m Senior Two students in Class Three. Yesterday afternoon I went to library in a hurry and left my English text book there. I didn’t didn’t remember it until I got home and began to review my lessons. There are a lot of notes in the book so it is important to me. Besides I can’t have my English lessons without it . The mid – term examination is drawing near and I feel very worried. Will anyone who found it be so kind as to send it either to the library or to the teachers’ office on the fifth floor? Many thanks to the finder.
看图、图表、统计表写作
看图、图表、统计表写作就是根据图画及文字的提示来写文章。有层次地将图画、图表、统计表中的内容表达出来，并提示其内涵。但不易过多。看图写作常用一般现在时，但如画面表现的是过去的故事，则也可用各种过去时态。举例：． 写一段关于人们饮食变化的短文，说明变化的原因，以及根据这些变化行出的结论，字数左右。
Food
Grain
%
%
%
%
%
Fruit,vegetable
%
%
%
%
%
Milk,meat
%
%
%
%
%
Total
%
%
%
%
%
As can be seen from the table, great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from to . The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high-energy food. such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. Why are there changes in people’s diet? There are two major reasons, I think. First, nowadays people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. Second, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. Therefore they try their best to improve the structure of their food.． 可以参考考试手册 P 年春考根据图表，简要描述某城市近几年每百人手机（mobile phone）用户增长情况并要试分析其增长原因。秋考（看图作文）简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
说明文
说明文是说明事物有某方面知识等的一种文体，说明事物的性质、作用、成因及结果等，从而使人们对这一事物有个明确、完整的了解和认识。人物的生平、简历等也属于说明文。说明文大都用一般现在时态。在写作时要求充分利用提示，语句简明，选词正确，且多用第三人称。l 水非常重要。 我们必须保护水。参考文As we know, water is very important to living things. Without water there can be no life on the earth. All animals and plants need water. So does man. It is reported that a healthy man can live about seven days without food, but without water, he can live no more than three days.Water is also important to agriculture and industry. Without water, plants will die, then men and animals will have no food. Without water, power stations can’t produce electricity.Water can also clean the air. When it rains. Most dusts in the air will fall down with rain water and thus the air is cleaned.Although about percent of the earth’s surface is covered with water, there are many places in the world still short of water. In many places nowadays, water is seriously polluted. So we must do all we can to prevent water from being polluted.Water is of great importance. We must protect water and make full use of it.l 如何防止病菌侵入人体。参考文Because germs cause diseases, it’s important to keep these tiny creatures from entering our bodies with our food, with the air we breathe, or through cuts in the skin. These harmful creatures are so small that they can mot be seen even with the most powerful microscope. Therefore, we must take great care of our food, water, air and so on . Besides, in case some harmful creatures enter the body, we should try our best to use the most valuable germ killers that might fight those creatures still causing great trouble. In the past, penicillin was the one that people used quite often and it was very effective.Nowadays, nearly every day, we hear of the discovery of new medicine . But still we have some diseases such as cancer and AIDS that haven’t been beaten by any medicine. We have a long way to go before we control germs.
议论文
议论文是通过议论来阐述事物的道理，表明作者的立场、观点、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文说理要注意准确性、鲜明性和生动性。并须突出论点，论据要充分，论证要严密。l .中国的家长习惯为他们的孩子决定一切。.我认为，应该让他们学会独立参考文Parents in China tend to take too much care of their children and make all decisions for them. They choose schools and make the timetable for them, and even decide what clothes they should wear. Upon graduation, parents do all they can to find jobs for them.Parents cannot accompany their children and make decisions for them all the time. Deciding everything for children does not help them to make their own way in the world and will cause them to form a passive and dependent character, which will do more harm than good.Learning to be independent is the natural way for everybody. As a child grows up, he will graduate from a school or a college. After graduation he will go to work and then have his own family. This is the way every parent has experienced. So I think merely giving more advice rather than making decisions is more helpful.l . 减轻学生过重课业负担是必要的。. 感想参考文Why and how to reduce the students’ heavy burdens has become a hot topic in our schools.As a student, I think it’s necessary to lighten our unnecessary burdens. It’s true that our schoolbags have grown heavier and heavier. We are made to do a lot of homework both in class and after class. Many of my classmates work late into the night. Some even stay up until eleven or twelve o’clock at night and we have to be at school at seven fifteen next morning. We lack sleep, which makes us feel sleepy during the day. Some of us can’t focus our attention during the course of the lesson. If things go on like this, we well only work out the problems like a robot and it well do great harm to our health. Besides, endless homework limits our imagination and spoils our creative ability.I hate endless homework. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. I hope our teachers, parents and the whole society can understand us and relieve us of too much homework.参考作文l （一）姚明去美国“火箭队”(Rocket)打球，自从月底首次亮相，上场分钟一分未得起，今天他已经……他今年秋天要来。。。从这件事，你觉得可以悟出些道理呢？l （二）记预防“禽流感”中你最难忘的一件事。（记叙文）l （三）面临自然害我们该怎么做（举一实例说明）l （四）。失败是生活中常见的事。 ．不同的人对失败有不同的态度； ．我的观点。l （五）The Most impressive Place That I Have ever Visitedl （六）。学校教育的变化。（说明文） ．素质教育的重要性。（议论文）l （七）对Cheat an exam谈谈你的看法（议论文）l （八）给白衣天使的一封感谢信。（应用文）l （九）你的朋友方芳将参加军训，但有点害怕艰苦。 给她写封信，谈谈你的看法并给予鼓励。l （十）如何写好一篇英语作文（说明文）l （十一）年春考国际青年艺术节(the International Youth Art Festival)即将举行。作为一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。l (十二)年秋考．一些学生认为学英语很重要。．一些学生则认为不必学英语。．我认为…（观点，理由）
《怎样写好英语作文？》(由[xszw.org]整理)生成时间:2008-3-17 22:35:55
·下篇文章：英语 高分作文写作技巧
吴迎建
近几年英语高考作文(由[xszw.org]整理)评分标准
语言：分（无病句，大小写正确，介词正确…等等）内容分（审题正确，内容符合要求,尤其要注意提示）。结构分（句型变化多，层次清楚。用词贴切等等）。
一）最后几天要注意材料的积累，和语言基础方面的训练。
．一般个字的作文被称为三段作文法，“开头、正文（可以量化）和结尾。．句子要有变化，如分词、复合句、强调句、倒装句。 要背一些好的词组、关联词、介词、过渡词。．每一段的第一句被称为topic sentences 要简练、明确。．要学会一个意思多种表达法。例如：I can do the job.I am fit for the job.I am qualified for the job.Challenging this job can give me pleasure.
二）写作方法和技巧
记叙文
记叙文是以记人、叙事、写景等为主的一种文体。记叙文一般有六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果。讲什么，要交待清楚，使文章有头有尾。记叙文叙述方法通常有第一人称和第三人称两种。学生易犯错误，时态不一致，中心、主题不突出。Eg. 记事 A.我最难忘的一件事 B. 为何难忘 C. 感想 I will never forget the day, May , when I became a League member. I had not thought seriously about my joining the League for I thought I was not good enough to join it. At the end of lastterm our League secretary had a long talk with me. It was notuntil then that I decided to make more progress in both mystudies and behaviors. I was invited to take part in the activities held by the League Branch.There I came to know how a League member shouldbehave. I became more and more interested in those activities. Itried my best to overcome my short comings and improve myself. My wish came true on May , the festival for youth. From then on, I fell I have grown up.年秋考 A.我最难忘的一课 B. 为何难忘 C. 感想 记人 我的邻居 Grandpa Zhang is my neighbour. Although he is retired from the factory he is busy at home. In the morning he goes to the food market and then does washing at home. He also takes good care of his grandson whose parents are both working abroad. His wife is in poor health and he has to look after her too. Not only does he care for his family but he cares for the neighbours as well.
Once his next door neighbour was locked outside and turned to him for help. He tried hard to open the door for him. Another time, my mother suddenly fell ill and my father was away on business he helped me to send my mother to hospital in quick time. We all say that grandpa Zhang is the man who never stays idle.
年春考 A.李铭平时很关心他人 B.他买彩票中了奖 C. 他父母打算。。。他打算。。。
应用文
应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的文体。书信、便条、通知。。。等都是一种常见的应用文。学生易犯错误，格式弄错，为何写这信的目的不清楚。Eg. ）申请去美国大学上学。 No. High school Pear Tree Road Shanghai P. R. China
th
Oct., Admission OfficeUniversity of RochesterRochester, NY, USADear Sirs, I wish to apply for a place in the Dept. of Chemistry of your university in the fall of . I’m now a senior in No. High School, Shanghai People’s Republic of China. So far, I’vegot excellent results in my studies and I take special interest in chemistry. I hope to be lucky enough to enter your university right after my graduation. Could you please mail to me your application form and all the related information ? Your timely response is appreciated. Sincerely yours, XX）应聘信P.O. Box ShanghaiMay
th
, P.O.Box BeijingBear Manager,I learned from the China Daily that company is looking for an English secretary. I would like to apply for the post.My name is Fu Tao I am .I’ ve been working as a guide in an international tourist agency since I graduated from the English Department of Zhejiang University four years ago. I am hard-working, and I am seeking a more challenging position with more opportunities than my present job can offer. Thank you for your consideration.Faithfully Yours,Fu Tao 寻物启示I’m Senior Two students in Class Three. Yesterday afternoon I went to library in a hurry and left my English text book there. I didn’t didn’t remember it until I got home and began to review my lessons. There are a lot of notes in the book so it is important to me. Besides I can’t have my English lessons without it . The mid – term examination is drawing near and I feel very worried. Will anyone who found it be so kind as to send it either to the library or to the teachers’ office on the fifth floor? Many thanks to the finder.
看图、图表、统计表写作
看图、图表、统计表写作就是根据图画及文字的提示来写文章。有层次地将图画、图表、统计表中的内容表达出来，并提示其内涵。但不易过多。看图写作常用一般现在时，但如画面表现的是过去的故事，则也可用各种过去时态。举例：． 写一段关于人们饮食变化的短文，说明变化的原因，以及根据这些变化行出的结论，字数左右。
Food
Grain
%
%
%
%
%
Fruit,vegetable
%
%
%
%
%
Milk,meat
%
%
%
%
%
Total
%
%
%
%
%
As can be seen from the table, great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from to . The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high-energy food. such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. Why are there changes in people’s diet? There are two major reasons, I think. First, nowadays people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. Second, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. Therefore they try their best to improve the structure of their food.． 可以参考考试手册 P 年春考根据图表，简要描述某城市近几年每百人手机（mobile phone）用户增长情况并要试分析其增长原因。秋考（看图作文）简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
说明文
说明文是说明事物有某方面知识等的一种文体，说明事物的性质、作用、成因及结果等，从而使人们对这一事物有个明确、完整的了解和认识。人物的生平、简历等也属于说明文。说明文大都用一般现在时态。在写作时要求充分利用提示，语句简明，选词正确，且多用第三人称。l 水非常重要。 我们必须保护水。参考文As we know, water is very important to living things. Without water there can be no life on the earth. All animals and plants need water. So does man. It is reported that a healthy man can live about seven days without food, but without water, he can live no more than three days.Water is also important to agriculture and industry. Without water, plants will die, then men and animals will have no food. Without water, power stations can’t produce electricity.Water can also clean the air. When it rains. Most dusts in the air will fall down with rain water and thus the air is cleaned.Although about percent of the earth’s surface is covered with water, there are many places in the world still short of water. In many places nowadays, water is seriously polluted. So we must do all we can to prevent water from being polluted.Water is of great importance. We must protect water and make full use of it.l 如何防止病菌侵入人体。参考文Because germs cause diseases, it’s important to keep these tiny creatures from entering our bodies with our food, with the air we breathe, or through cuts in the skin. These harmful creatures are so small that they can mot be seen even with the most powerful microscope. Therefore, we must take great care of our food, water, air and so on . Besides, in case some harmful creatures enter the body, we should try our best to use the most valuable germ killers that might fight those creatures still causing great trouble. In the past, penicillin was the one that people used quite often and it was very effective.Nowadays, nearly every day, we hear of the discovery of new medicine . But still we have some diseases such as cancer and AIDS that haven’t been beaten by any medicine. We have a long way to go before we control germs.
议论文
议论文是通过议论来阐述事物的道理，表明作者的立场、观点、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文说理要注意准确性、鲜明性和生动性。并须突出论点，论据要充分，论证要严密。l .中国的家长习惯为他们的孩子决定一切。.我认为，应该让他们学会独立参考文Parents in China tend to take too much care of their children and make all decisions for them. They choose schools and make the timetable for them, and even decide what clothes they should wear. Upon graduation, parents do all they can to find jobs for them.Parents cannot accompany their children and make decisions for them all the time. Deciding everything for children does not help them to make their own way in the world and will cause them to form a passive and dependent character, which will do more harm than good.Learning to be independent is the natural way for everybody. As a child grows up, he will graduate from a school or a college. After graduation he will go to work and then have his own family. This is the way every parent has experienced. So I think merely giving more advice rather than making decisions is more helpful.l . 减轻学生过重课业负担是必要的。. 感想参考文Why and how to reduce the students’ heavy burdens has become a hot topic in our schools.As a student, I think it’s necessary to lighten our unnecessary burdens. It’s true that our schoolbags have grown heavier and heavier. We are made to do a lot of homework both in class and after class. Many of my classmates work late into the night. Some even stay up until eleven or twelve o’clock at night and we have to be at school at seven fifteen next morning. We lack sleep, which makes us feel sleepy during the day. Some of us can’t focus our attention during the course of the lesson. If things go on like this, we well only work out the problems like a robot and it well do great harm to our health. Besides, endless homework limits our imagination and spoils our creative ability.I hate endless homework. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. I hope our teachers, parents and the whole society can understand us and relieve us of too much homework.参考作文l （一）姚明去美国“火箭队”(Rocket)打球，自从月底首次亮相，上场分钟一分未得起，今天他已经……他今年秋天要来。。。从这件事，你觉得可以悟出些道理呢？l （二）记预防“禽流感”中你最难忘的一件事。（记叙文）l （三）面临自然害我们该怎么做（举一实例说明）l （四）。失败是生活中常见的事。 ．不同的人对失败有不同的态度； ．我的观点。l （五）The Most impressive Place That I Have ever Visitedl （六）。学校教育的变化。（说明文） ．素质教育的重要性。（议论文）l （七）对Cheat an exam谈谈你的看法（议论文）l （八）给白衣天使的一封感谢信。（应用文）l （九）你的朋友方芳将参加军训，但有点害怕艰苦。 给她写封信，谈谈你的看法并给予鼓励。l （十）如何写好一篇英语作文（说明文）l （十一）年春考国际青年艺术节(the International Youth Art Festival)即将举行。作为一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。l (十二)年秋考．一些学生认为学英语很重要。．一些学生则认为不必学英语。．我认为…（观点，理由）
《怎样写好英语作文？》(由[xszw.org]整理)生成时间:2008-3-17 22:35:55
·上篇文章：英语应用文写作之求职信(Letters of Applying for a Job)
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